Missing The Bus

 

 

 

 


Missing The Bus


Ah sure we’ve loads of time

I say, it doesn’t go till three

We can take the long way round

To kill the hour, just you and me


A tour of distraction I shall lead

The sun, the sea, the sand

And for the whole of this last hour

I get to talk and hold your hand


We check the time, we’ve cut it fine

To reach our parting stop

But if we boot it up the hill

We might just make it to the top


I wonder how you’ll take it

When you see the bus fly past

Before we reach the junction in the road

And knowing that it was the last


When we see the race is lost

Just by a minute did it win

I apologise profusely

And hide my happiness within


For I have you for another night

You do not seem that fazed

That a minute late might change your life

In many new and unknown ways

 

©Copyrighted by Colin Ryan (2010)


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18 responses

  1. Missed the bus, but caught the moment. Nice!

    September 8, 2010 at 7:24 am

  2. The last two lines caught me :

    That a minute late might change your life
    In many new and unknown ways

    Very true! Love your words =P We never know what going to happen next, it is always good to be early =P

    September 8, 2010 at 10:11 am

    • yes, there are positives in anything that happens, missing one planned opportunity can open the door to an even better one, even when manipulated like here.

      September 9, 2010 at 8:15 am

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    September 8, 2010 at 10:37 am

    • What’s it all about and how does it work?

      September 9, 2010 at 8:16 am

  4. Great work. I love the idea behind this, totally. This is a creative and interesting piece. A common story made uncommon in this poem…Nice!

    Cheers!

    September 9, 2010 at 9:57 am

    • Thankyou for the encouragement :o)

      September 9, 2010 at 5:41 pm

  5. love the story line, how the plan unravels in the end…sweet deception. 🙂 and the image is beautiful.

    September 9, 2010 at 8:19 pm

  6. Simply slendid from beginning to end…I love how it unfolded. Job well done my friend.x

    September 10, 2010 at 12:26 am

    • Thankyou so much, it was a lovely sight to behold when it really happened

      April 14, 2011 at 10:32 pm

  7. Wow. Great story in this poem. I want to know more. 🙂

    September 10, 2010 at 3:42 am

    • Well, the two of them went from there to become a solid partnership full of love and humour, and remembered that day with affection

      April 14, 2011 at 10:31 pm

  8. This is fantastic, almost sounds musical. Well done!!

    September 10, 2010 at 5:31 pm

  9. This was simply beautiful!!
    How will they react when it all unfolds before their eyes? I wonder…
    And it’s all cooking up inside…

    Ah.. the suspense! Loved it!

    September 10, 2010 at 7:25 pm

    • Thankyou so much. how it unfolded, as I recall, the event was remembered with fondness and humour and affection, and it all grew and blossomed from there

      April 14, 2011 at 10:27 pm

  10. lovely poetry.
    Thanks for sharing!

    September 11, 2010 at 5:19 pm

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    September 11, 2010 at 5:19 pm

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